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Old 1st July 2011, 06:13 AM   #1
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We are having a educational website, for betterment of our site performance we need your strong response, I appreciate if you review my site Write My Essay and give me feedback as well.

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Old 1st July 2011, 01:25 PM   #2
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Actually... I don't have a lot to say. You seem to be using Page Titles properly and all that. I like the way your content is shown... headline and then short paragraph.

I don't want to be a stickler... but a lot of the headlines are SPACED different from the paragraph. What I mean... is in some cases, the HEADLINE and PARAGRAPH have no space... on some others.. there is TOO MUCH space. I am sure it's a page return or something that you can eliminate. I like it (and it makes more sense) to have NO SPACE between the headline and the paragraph.

Now... your link went to a page. Why not your home page?? Well... maybe I know the problem. Your home page is weak. You have a nice welcome... but I would think you want to PUSH THE PROBLEM. What are the 'PAINS' that your readers have??? You will get more response when you RUB IT IN on the pain.. and then show them the solution. Follow??

Otherwise, I think it's a good site. Hope this helps!

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Old 28th July 2011, 03:04 PM   #3
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Hi. I just looked at the page in the link and I did not go much further into the site. I noticed a few issues with grammer. Have someone proof read your site. I have found many mistakes on my sites over the years.

"Our writers work hard and company have all the skills necessary to provide quality services." This just does not sound right to me....

"Nevertheless, many students have not gifted with appropriate skill of writing."

I suggest you open up a PO Box or add a physical address on the contact us page it will look more credible. Also list out your writer's qualifications. Do they have degrees? Provide a link to show samples of their work.

Add a nice human interest story on how and why you launched this site. I usually need background information on someone or their company before I purchase online. Here is the about us page from my main website:

http://www.assistedlivingstore.com/t-about.aspx

I think a little background on who you are will make the difference in sales. Read the story at the bottom of my page this is the human interest story on why we started the business.

I hope my comments help.

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Old 28th July 2011, 09:50 PM   #4
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We are having a educational website, for betterment of our site performance we need your strong response, I appreciate if you review my site Write My Essay and give me feedback as well.
You let this guy link drop on his first post? Who's moderating?

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Old 29th July 2011, 06:50 AM   #5
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Sorry I thought you were talking about my link My fault

Sorry I did not know that posting a link was bad. I figured since I spent the time to look at this person's website and gave "what I thought" was a fair review the link might help. We have been very successful in attracting customers and the media from our "About Us" section.

The story on our site has put us on the front page of the business section in the Saint Paul Pioneer Press, front page of the Variety Section in the Minneapolis Star Tribune, a mention in US World and Report, Prevention Magazine, Wallstreet Journal...and many others.

It is not like I provided poor feedback and placed a link just for links sake. I did take some time to review the person's site.

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Old 29th July 2011, 07:33 AM   #6
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no no see my quote it was the first post of the thread.. I am just sour that I got dinged for doing the same thing the other day.

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